Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise, correct grammar, and organize into a clear topic sentence + supporting details. Avoid redundancy and use linking words. Correct tense and article use (e.g., “a pink one” not “read a pink one”), and use pronouns appropriately. Provide one or two specific details (age, activities) to enrich the answer.

예시: Yes, I did. I had two bikes as a child: a small pink one and a larger blue one. I usually rode the pink bike because it was smaller and easier to control, so I felt more confident riding it around my neighborhood.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give specific reasons with linking words (for example, because, so). Correct grammar (e.g., “Bikes are not very popular in my country”) and word choice (“eventually” → “often” or “generally”). Add a short example or comparison to support your point.

예시: Not really. Bikes are not very popular in my country because people prefer cars, buses or motorcycles for long trips. For example, most families own a car for convenience and safety, especially when travelling with children, so cycling is mainly seen as a leisure activity rather than a regular mode of transport.

× I had two of them one with a pink and other with a blue.

✓ I had two of them, one pink and the other blue.

The error is using incorrect articles and word order for count nouns. 'one with a pink and other with a blue' is ungrammatical. Use 'one pink and the other blue' or 'one was pink and the other was blue' to correctly pair items and use 'the' before 'other' when referring to a specific second item. Suggestion: say 'one pink and the other blue' or 'one was pink and the other was blue.'

× I prefer read a pink one because it's smaller and easier to control when I ride it and yeah it made me feel comfortable.

✓ I preferred the pink one because it was smaller and easier to control when I rode it, and it made me feel comfortable.

The student mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. The question asked about childhood (past), so verbs should be in the past tense: 'preferred', 'was', 'rode', 'made'. Also 'prefer read a pink one' is ungrammatical: 'prefer' plus verb needs '-ing' (prefer reading) or an object ('prefer the pink one'). Here the correct form is 'preferred the pink one.' Remove filler 'yeah' in formal speech. Suggestion: keep all verbs in simple past when describing past habits or experiences.

× My country bikes are not popular in my country.

✓ Bicycles are not popular in my country.

This sentence is redundant and has awkward word order. 'My country bikes' is incorrect collocation. Use the noun 'bicycles' or 'bikes' with the subject first: 'Bicycles are not popular in my country.' Suggestion: use a clear subject ('Bicycles') and avoid repeating 'my country.'

× They mostly prefer convenient options such as cars, bus or eventually motorcycle.

✓ People mostly prefer convenient options such as cars, buses, or eventually motorcycles.

Errors: wrong noun forms and missing plural agreement for a list of examples. 'bus' and 'motorcycle' should be plural to match 'cars' and general reference. 'Eventually' is the wrong adverb here; use 'eventually' only for sequence—better is 'perhaps' or 'sometimes' or 'or motorcycles.' Also 'They' is ambiguous; 'People' clarifies general statement. Suggestion: use plural forms when giving general examples and choose appropriate adverb ('or motorcycles' or 'and sometimes motorcycles').

× It's make them feel comfortable and safer with their long journey.

✓ It makes them feel comfortable and safer on long journeys.

Subject-verb agreement error: 'It' (third person singular) requires 'makes' not 'make.' Preposition and noun choices: use 'on long journeys' rather than 'with their long journey.' Also 'safer' is fine, but 'on long journeys' is the natural collocation. Suggestion: use 'makes' for third-person singular and the preposition 'on' with plural 'journeys' for general statements.