Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. To improve, answer directly with a clear topic sentence (yes/no), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural, concise (maximum 5 sentences), and relevant vocabulary.

예시: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. In fact, I got it for my seventh birthday and rode it to school every day. Because our house was near a park, I often practiced tricks there with my friends.

제안: Your answer gives an opinion but is repetitive and slightly informal. Improve by using a clear topic sentence, avoiding repetition, and adding a specific reason or example using linking words (for example, because, however). Use slightly more precise vocabulary (e.g., scooters, motor scooters) and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are fairly popular in my country, but scooters are even more common. For example, many people prefer scooters for short commutes because they are cheaper to run and easier to park. Consequently, you see more scooters than bicycles in city traffic.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ When you were a child, did you have a bike?

This is not a grammatical error in terms of tense or agreement but the student's repetition of the examiner's question is phrased awkwardly. Reordering the sentence to place the time expression at the beginning makes it more natural in English and focuses the context: 'When you were a child, did you have a bike?' Suggestion: start with the time phrase for clarity and natural flow.

× I think yes bikes are pretty popular but more than bikes it's the scooties and scooties that are very popular.

✓ I think bikes are pretty popular, but more than bikes, it is scooties that are very popular.

Errors addressed: repetition and unnatural structure. The student used 'it's the scooties and scooties' which is redundant. Also 'I think yes bikes are...' is awkward; omit 'yes' or reposition it. The correction uses 'it is scooties that are very popular' to emphasize the comparison. Suggestion: remove redundant words, use commas to separate clauses, and use cleft structure ('it is ... that') to emphasize contrast. Also 'scooties' is treated as a plural noun, so use 'they' in alternative phrasing: 'but more than bikes, scooties are very popular.'