Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant and clear, but it's slightly long and has minor grammatical issues. To improve, start with a direct topic sentence, correct tense/word choice (e.g., ‘motorbike’ vs ‘bike’), and tighten the explanation into one or two concise sentences. Use a linking phrase if you add a brief reason.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. In my country you have to be at least eighteen to ride a motorbike, and I was only about thirteen or fourteen, so I wasn’t allowed to drive.

제안: The idea is good, but the answer has several grammar, word choice and clarity problems. Begin with a clear topic sentence, use correct vocabulary (e.g., ‘definitely’, ‘motorbikes’, ‘Formula’ or ‘motorbike races’), and organize supporting details with linking words. Be specific about examples and avoid redundancy.

예시: Yes, bikes are definitely popular in my country. For example, we have many motorbike races and even local Formula-style events, so a lot of young people are enthusiastic fans of motorbikes.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child in my country.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child in my country.

This sentence is correct in past tense; no change needed. It correctly uses the past simple negative 'didn't have' to describe a past state.

× You must be at least eighteen to ride a motorbike and I was only around fourteen or thirteen at the time so I wasn't allowed to drive.

✓ You had to be at least eighteen to ride a motorbike, and I was only about fourteen or thirteen at the time, so I wasn't allowed to drive.

Use 'had to' to report a past rule or requirement rather than 'must' which is present/future-oriented; 'about' is more natural than 'around' for approximate age; add a comma before 'so' for clarity. Suggestion: use past modal forms like 'had to' when referring to past obligations or rules.

× It is absolutely in our country, bikes are extremely popular because we have various bike competitions or formilla racing one bike races in our country as there are very youngsters who are crazy fans of the motor bikes.

✓ Absolutely, bikes are extremely popular in our country because we have various bike competitions, like Formula racing and one-bike races, and many young people are crazy fans of motorbikes.

Original sentence has awkward structure and several issues: 'It is absolutely in our country' is ungrammatical—start with 'Absolutely' or 'In our country'; 'formilla' is misspelled and should be 'Formula'; 'one bike races' should be 'one-bike races'; 'there are very youngsters' is incorrect phrasing—use 'many young people'; 'motor bikes' is usually 'motorbikes' or 'motorbikes' as one word. Suggestions: simplify the sentence into clear clauses, use parallel structure with commas, correct spelling, and use 'many' for countable plural nouns.