Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains multiple grammar and word-choice errors. Give a direct topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two brief, specific supporting details (when you got it and a short memory). Use correct verbs and avoid unnecessary words. Keep the reply under five sentences and use linking words like "and" or "when."

예시: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was six, and I rode it to my kindergarten almost every day. I remember practicing in the park with my father until I learned to balance without training wheels.

제안: Your answer is generally clear but contains some awkward phrasing. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add a specific reason and an example. Use more natural phrasing (e.g., "shared bikes" → "bike-sharing schemes", "ride it to the place wherever they want to go" → "use them for short trips"). Keep it concise and use a linking word like "because" or "for example."

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because of widespread bike-sharing schemes. For example, many people use shared bikes to make short trips to work or to run errands, especially in busy city areas.

× Of course, I often wrote it to my kindergarten and I naught it at my age of six.

✓ Of course, I often rode it to kindergarten and I bought it at the age of six.

Multiple issues: 'wrote' is incorrect verb choice (should be 'rode' for riding a bike) — maps to past tense/verb choice error (ID 5 Past tense issue). 'naught' is a wrong word; context requires 'bought' (past tense of buy). 'to my kindergarten' is unnatural; use 'to kindergarten' (article unnecessary). Also add 'the' in 'at the age of six' for idiomatic correctness. Suggestion: choose verbs that match the activity (ride/rode, buy/bought) and use standard phrases ('to kindergarten', 'at the age of six').

× Sure, there are many shared bikes on the road and you can see many people ride it to the place wherever they want to go.

✓ Sure, there are many shared bikes on the road and you can see many people ride them to wherever they want to go.

Problems: 'many people ride it' has pronoun-pronoun agreement error — 'many people' is plural so the pronoun must be plural ('them') (ID 12 Incorrect use of pronouns and ID 1 Singular and plural issue). 'to the place wherever they want to go' is wordy and incorrect; 'to wherever they want to go' or simply 'wherever they want to go' is idiomatic (maps to sentence structure/word choice - ID 26). Suggestion: match pronouns to their antecedents (people -> them) and use concise, natural phrases ('ride them to wherever they want to go').