Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Исправьте грамматическую структуру вопроса и ответьте прямо на вопрос экзаменатора. Начните с простого утверждения о наличии велосипеда в детстве, затем добавьте одну-две конкретные детали (например, кто подарил велосипед, как часто вы на нём катались). Избегайте повторять слова экзаменатора и не делайте лишних грамматических ошибок. Используйте связующие слова, если даёте дополнительные детали (например, "and", "because", "so").

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for my seventh birthday, and I used to ride it to the park almost every day because I loved cycling with my friends.

제안: Не повторяйте вопрос экзаменатора; дайте прямой ответ и обоснуйте его конкретными причинами. Начните с короткого утверждения (Yes/No/Partly), затем добавьте 1–2 поддерживающих детали с примерами (например, использование велосипедов в городах, рост числа велополос, погодные или культурные факторы). Используйте связующие слова (например, "because", "for example", "however") для логичности речи.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. For example, many people use bicycles for short commutes because there are more bike lanes now and traffic can be heavy, so cycling is often faster and cheaper.

× Did you have a bike when I we were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used incorrect subject pronouns 'I we'. The correct subject for addressing the examiner is 'you'. Use 'you' for the person being asked. Remove the extra pronoun 'I' and keep 'you'. Also keep singular 'a child' when referring to the listener's childhood.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

This sentence is already grammatically correct. The present simple tense 'do you think' and 'are popular' correctly express a general opinion about the present. No correction needed.