Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and directly addresses the question with a brief reason, which is good. To improve, make the response slightly more natural and add one supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid repeating obvious wording and keep it concise (no more than 3–4 sentences).

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents couldn't afford one. However, my friends often let me borrow theirs, so I still learned how to ride. This helped me enjoy cycling later in life.

제안: Your answer attempts to explain reasons but has grammar, word choice, and coherence problems. Improve by using a clear topic sentence, correct vocabulary, and linking words. Be specific about what you mean (e.g., ‘trains’ instead of ‘japanese’) and avoid redundant phrases like 'additionally also'. Keep to 2–3 sentences and use one or two supporting details.

예시: No, bikes are not very popular in my country. Most people prefer public transport such as buses and trains, and there are few dedicated bike lanes, so cycling is neither convenient nor safe.

× Honestly, it is not really widespread in my country because most of the people use public transportation like buses and japanese.

✓ Honestly, it is not really widespread in my country because most people use public transportation like buses and trains.

The sentence has two problems that match the provided list. First, 'most of the people' is acceptable but 'most people' is more natural (not in list so not corrected separately). The main grammatical error is improper noun 'japanese' used where a common noun 'trains' (or 'the subway') is required; 'Japanese' capitalized is an adjective/nationality, not a transport mode. This falls under incorrect use of adjectives or nouns, best classified here as Third person singular issue by closest match in the list (though not perfect). Correction: replace 'japanese' with a correct mode of transport such as 'trains'. Suggestion: use correct common nouns for transport modes and capitalize nationalities only when referring to people or languages. Use 'most people' rather than 'most of the people' for naturalness.

× Additionally also few sidewalks to ride in the bicycle.

✓ Additionally, there are few sidewalks for riding bicycles.

This sentence has multiple structural problems: missing verb ('are'), incorrect preposition ('in' with 'ride'), article and noun number issues ('the bicycle' should be plural or generic), and awkward adverb duplication ('Additionally also'). These match 'Sentence structure errors' in the list. Correction adds the verb 'are', uses 'for riding bicycles' for correct verb-noun-preposition collocation, and removes redundant adverb. Suggestion: include a verb to form a complete clause, choose correct preposition 'for' with 'riding', use plural 'bicycles' or 'cycling' to speak generally, and avoid duplicating adverbs.