Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, sentence structure and clarity. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct verb forms and articles, and avoid extra words. Use one or two supporting details connected with a linking word. For example, correct "I were" to "I was," use "when I was seven" and replace "entry my primary school" with "started primary school."

예시: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven years old, when I started primary school. It helped me travel to school more easily and I rode it with my friends after classes.

제안: Make the response more direct and coherent. Begin with a clear topic sentence (e.g., "Yes, bikes are very popular"). Remove irrelevant phrases like "I was pretty young" unless they support the point, and use linking words (for example "because" or "so") to add a specific reason or example. Correct grammar: use "almost everyone had a bike" for past or "almost everyone has a bike" for present consistency.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short journeys. For example, when I was a child almost everyone rode a bike to school, especially in smaller towns.

× Yes I did. I had a bike when I were seven years old when I first entry my primary school.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was seven years old, when I first entered primary school.

Errors: 'were' is incorrect for singular past tense of be with 'I' — correct form is 'was' (Past tense issue). 'entry' is a noun; the correct past tense verb is 'entered' (Past tense issue). Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'was' with I in past contexts and use the past tense verb 'entered' for the action of starting school. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× Yes, it is I was pretty young, but I do remember almost everyone has a bike to go to school.

✓ Yes, I was pretty young, but I do remember that almost everyone had a bike to go to school.

Errors: 'Yes, it is I was pretty young' is ungrammatical and mixes tenses; replace with 'Yes, I was pretty young' to state past condition (Sentence structure error and Past tense issue). 'Almost everyone has a bike' mixes present tense with past context; use past tense 'had' to match 'was pretty young' (Subject-verb agreement and tense consistency). Also add 'that' for clarity. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent within the sentence — use past tense when referring to past situations, and ensure subject and verb agree in number and tense. Grammar problem type ID: 27