Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise, grammatically correct and directly answer the question with one clear topic sentence, then add one brief supporting detail. Fix tense and number errors (use past tense for childhood). Use a linking word like “and” or “but” to connect ideas. Avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I learned to ride it in the park near my house.

제안: Start with a clear opinion sentence (Yes/No or Mostly/Not really), then give specific reasons and examples using linking words such as “because,” “however,” or “for example.” Correct grammar and pronouns: use “people” instead of “their” and avoid sentence fragments.

예시: Not really; bicycles are less popular than running in my country because many people prefer jogging for exercise. However, cycling is becoming more common among young people who ride mountain bikes or use ordinary bikes for short trips.

× When I was a kid I when I was kids I have a bike.

✓ When I was a kid I had a bike.

The sentence mixes past and present forms and uses incorrect plural 'kids' for the subject; the time frame 'When I was a kid' requires past tense 'had' not present 'have'. Also remove the duplicated phrase. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense for past time expressions and use singular 'kid' to match 'I'.

× However now I still have one too.

✓ However, I still have one now.

The original word order is awkward; using 'I still have one now' is clearer and keeps present tense which is appropriate to express current possession. Also add a comma after 'However' for clarity. Suggestion: place time adverb 'now' at the end and keep the present tense 'have'.

× Definitely not in my country.

✓ Definitely not; bicycles are not very popular in my country.

As a standalone reply this fragment is acceptable in speech but is abrupt and lacks clarity. Expanding to a full sentence clarifies the subject and verb. Suggestion: Provide a complete clause naming the topic (bicycles) and a verb phrase describing popularity.

× Their interest in running.

✓ People here are more interested in running.

The original is a fragment missing a verb and uses 'their' without a clear antecedent. Rewriting as a full sentence 'People here are more interested in running' clarifies the subject and adds the verb 'are'. Suggestion: use a clear subject and verb to form complete sentences.

× Not bicycling but still have some love do bike like mountain bike or just a normal bike that we can ride.

✓ Not many people cycle, but some still like to go mountain biking or ride an ordinary bike.

This sentence has multiple issues: missing subject ('people'), incorrect verb forms ('have some love do bike'), and awkward noun phrases. Use 'not many people cycle' for negative generalisation, and parallel verb phrases 'like to go mountain biking' or 'ride an ordinary bike'. Suggestion: use 'people' as subject, 'cycle' as the verb for the activity, and parallel, idiomatic expressions for different bike types.