Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and clarity: use past tense consistently, form a clear topic sentence, and add one or two supporting details with linking words. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences). For example, start with “Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.” Then briefly add where or how you used it and a reason or memory.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it around my neighborhood almost every day, and I often raced my friends to the park. Because my parents lived nearby, biking was my main way of getting out and playing after school.

제안: Clarify meaning and fix vocabulary and grammar: decide on the main point (bikes are popular) and support it with specific reasons using linking words (for example, because, so, therefore). Avoid unclear words like “bags” unless you mean something specific. Keep answers direct, specific, and no longer than 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many students and workers cycle to school or the market, especially in cities with heavy traffic. As a result, you'll see bike lanes and many people parking bicycles near public transport stations.

× Yes, I have a bike and to ride when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike and used to ride it when I was a child.

The examiner asked about the past (when you were a child), so present tense 'have' is incorrect. Use past tense 'had' and the phrase 'used to' or 'would' to indicate habitual past action. Also include the object 'it' after 'ride' for clarity. Suggestion: use past tense verbs for past situations and include necessary objects. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Yes, and the bags are popular in my country because the most people I ride a bike.

✓ Yes, bicycles are popular in my country because most people ride bikes.

This sentence has multiple structural and word choice errors. 'And the bags are popular' is unrelated and likely a mistake; replace with 'bicycles' or 'bikes'. 'The most people' is incorrect quantifier order — use 'most people'. Remove the extra pronoun 'I' before 'ride'. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'most people ride'. Suggestion: state the subject clearly ('bicycles') and use correct quantifier and verb form. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× Yes, and the bags are popular in my country because the most people I ride a bike.

✓ Yes, bicycles are popular in my country because most people ride bikes.

The original uses the definite article 'the' incorrectly with 'most people' and misuses 'a bike' after 'ride' causing inconsistency. Omit 'the' before 'most people' and use the plural 'bikes' or 'bicycles' to match 'most people'. Suggestion: avoid unnecessary articles before quantifiers like 'most' and keep noun number consistent with the verb. Grammar problem type ID: 22}]} PMID: None.