Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Content and coherence: Your answer does not respond to the question. You should answer in past tense and directly state whether you had a bike as a child, then add a short supporting detail. Language use: avoid unrelated words (bag) and use correct tense and simple linking words. Keep your response within 1–3 sentences and be natural. Specific improvements: (1) Use past tense: “I didn’t have a bike when I was a child.” (2) Give one brief reason or memory: e.g., “My family lived in a small apartment so there wasn’t space to keep one.” (3) Use a linking word if adding detail: “because” or “so.”

예시: I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because we lived in a small apartment and didn’t have space to store one. As a result, I usually walked to school or took the bus.

제안: Content and clarity: Your answer addresses the question but contains vocabulary errors (“pads” instead of “bikes”), grammar mistakes (subject-verb agreement, tense), fillers (“uh”), and vague phrasing (“super interest”). Structure: Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Specific improvements: (1) Use correct noun and subject-verb agreement: “Yes, bikes are popular… because many people like to ride them.” (2) Replace fillers and vague adjectives with precise language: e.g., “because cycling is inexpensive and good exercise.” (3) Add a specific example or statistic if possible: “I see many commuters and students cycling to work and school.”

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people find cycling inexpensive and convenient. For example, I often see commuters and students riding bikes to work and school, especially along dedicated bike lanes.

× 'No, I don't have a bag.'

✓ 'No, I didn't.'

'Subject-verb agreement and tense error: The examiner asked about having a bike when the student was a child (past). The student replied with a present-tense negative about a different noun (bag), which is both the wrong tense and wrong subject. Use past simple to match the question and the same noun. Suggestion: use "I didn't" or full form "No, I didn't have a bike." to clearly answer the past question.'

× 'Yes, pads are popular in my country because many general people, uh, likes to ride bike because it's super interest.'

✓ 'Yes, bikes are popular in my country because many people like to ride bikes because it is very interesting.'

'Multiple sentence structure and word choice errors: 1) "pads" is likely a wrong word; context needs "bikes." 2) "many general people" is unnatural; use "many people." 3) Subject-verb agreement: "people" is plural so use "like," not "likes." 4) Count noun agreement: use plural "bikes." 5) "it's super interest" is incorrect adjective/noun form; use "it is very interesting." Suggestions: choose correct vocabulary (bikes), keep subject and verb number consistent, use an adjective (interesting) rather than noun (interest), and simplify phrasing to improve clarity.'