Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, avoid filler sounds (uh, umm), correct small grammar errors (plural forms, articles), and keep to 2–4 sentences. Add one specific detail to make the answer more informative (e.g., age when you switched bikes or a memory).

예시: Yes, I did. I had several bikes as a child: first a small one with training wheels until I was about six, and later a red sport bike I learned to ride without support. I remember riding around the park with my friends every weekend, which helped me gain confidence.

제안: Answer directly and fix pronunciation/word choice errors ("buys" → "bikes"). Use 2–3 clear sentences with linking words to explain why they are popular and include a specific fact or example. Remove filler words and grammatical mistakes (subject-verb agreement, articles).

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many students ride to school because it is cheap and convenient, and bike lanes in cities make cycling safer. As a result, cycling is an important part of daily life for a large portion of the population.

× The one with training wheels, and then when I got, uh, older, umm, some sport bikes without the training wheel.

✓ The one with training wheels, and then when I got older, some sport bikes without the training wheels.

The original mixes plural and singular forms incorrectly: 'training wheel' should be plural 'training wheels' to match 'sport bikes' and general usage. Use consistent plural nouns when referring to the pair of wheels typically fitted to children's bikes. Also remove unnecessary commas and filler words for clarity.

× Almost every student ride bikes to uh school and UH in our it is really important to uh a part of our population.

✓ Almost every student rides bikes to school, and in our country it is really important to a large part of our population.

The subject 'Almost every student' is singular, so the verb must take third person singular form 'rides' not 'ride'. Also the sentence had fragments and unclear phrases; I replaced 'in our it' with 'in our country' and clarified 'a part of our population' to 'a large part of our population' for meaning. Remove filler interjections for fluency.

× Yes, buys are very popular in our country.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in our country.

The original used 'buys' which is a misspelling and incorrect word; 'bikes' is the correct noun. This is a lexical/pronoun confusion affecting meaning. Correct the word to match the intended subject.