Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. To improve, answer directly with a clear topic sentence, add one or two specific supporting details, and use a linking word if you expand. Keep to no more than five sentences and use natural phrasing. For example, state whether you had a bike, describe it briefly (type, when you got it), and add a short reason or memory.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels that my parents bought for my sixth birthday. I used to ride it around the neighborhood every afternoon, which helped me learn balance and made me feel independent.

제안: You again repeated the question and changed its grammar rather than giving an opinion. To improve, give a clear opinion first (yes/no/partly), then support it with specific reasons or examples using linking words like 'because' or 'for example'. Keep answers concise and natural, avoid unnecessary repetition of the examiner's words.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. This is because many people use bicycles for short trips to work or school due to traffic and high fuel costs. For example, my city has several dedicated bike lanes and a public bike-sharing scheme that many commuters use.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

Original student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering; this is a sentence structure/response error. The question asks about past possession, so the correct response uses simple past tense 'had' and forms a complete declarative sentence. Suggestion: answer directly with 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child' or 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.' Keep tense consistent with the question (simple past).

× Did you think bikes are popular in a country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Student used past tense 'Did you think' and the noun phrase 'a country' which do not match the examiner's present-question context. The examiner asked in present simple 'Do you think...' about 'your country.' Correct structure for present opinion questions is 'Do you think + [clause]?' Also use the possessive 'your country' to indicate the student's country. Suggestion: use 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' when asking about current general opinion.