Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 문법과 어순 오류를 바로잡고, 간결한 토픽 문장과 하나 또는 두 개의 구체적 세부사항으로 답을 구성하세요. 예를 들어 과거 경험을 말할 때는 과거 시제를 정확히 사용하고, ‘하지만 지금은’ 같은 전환 표현을 자연스럽게 연결하세요. 또한 감탄사(Oh my God)는 공식 시험에서 피하고 대신 간단한 연결어를 사용하세요.

예시: I didn’t learn to ride a bike when I was a child. However, I learned recently and now I can ride comfortably around my neighborhood.

제안: 주제 문장으로 바로 답하고, 이유와 구체적 예시를 1~2개 더해 답을 확장하세요. 문법(주어-동사 일치)과 어순을 바로잡고, 연결어(for example, because)를 사용해 논리를 명확히 하세요. 불필요한 멈춤('uh')과 어색한 표현('walk')을 피하세요.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient. For example, many students ride bikes to school, and people often use them for short trips in cities to avoid traffic.

× Actually I ever never been drive a bike when I was young, but now, Oh my God, yes that's all.

✓ Actually I have never driven a bike when I was young, but now, oh my God, yes I do.

The sentence uses 'been drive' which incorrectly combines the past participle and base form. Use the present perfect 'have never driven' to indicate an experience up to now. 'Been' is unnecessary here. Also 'ever never' is redundant; use 'never' alone. 'That's all' is unclear in context; replaced with 'I do' to indicate current ability or action. Suggestion: Use 'I have never driven a bike when I was young' for experience, or better: 'I didn't have a bike when I was young' if referring to possession.

× Yes, actually. Uh, many people ride a bike when they was go to school or. Walk and so many people.

✓ Yes, actually. Uh, many people ride a bike when they go to school or walk; a lot of people do.

The clause 'they was go to school' has incorrect verb form: 'was' should be 'were' for plural or better use present tense 'go' to match 'ride'. The phrase should be 'when they go to school'. Also 'Walk' should be lowercase and parallel to 'ride a bike', so use 'walk'. 'So many people' is vague; 'a lot of people do' is clearer. Suggestion: Keep verbs consistent in number and tense, and maintain parallel structure for actions.