Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 短く直接的に答えられていますが、会話を広げるための追加情報が欠けています。トピック文の後に理由や簡単な詳細（例えば、なぜ持っていなかったか、代わりに何をしていたか）を1〜2文加え、接続語（because, so, instead）を使って流れをよくすると自然さが増します。発音は明瞭にしたまま、文を完全形（I didn't have one.）で言う練習をしてください。

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't afford one. Instead, I usually walked to school or took the bus, so I didn't learn to ride until I was older.

제안: 考えは伝わりますが、文法と語順、語彙の選択に改善が必要です。主語と代名詞（bikes → they）、重複した語の削除、より適切な表現（“big cars”より“large cars”や“cars are more common”）を使い、理由を明確に述べてください。また、接続語（because, although）を使って論理を繋げ、具体例（交通事情やインフラ）を一つ加えると説得力が増します。発音と流暢さも改善すると高得点につながります。

예시: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer large cars for comfort and status. For example, many families own SUVs, and cities are built around car use rather than cycling lanes.

× I don't think that it is because my country my country always use huge car.

✓ I don't think so because people in my country always use large cars.

The sentence has multiple grammatical issues. 1) 'I don't think that it is' is awkward; native speakers say 'I don't think so' or 'I don't think that bikes are popular.' 2) 'my country my country' is a repetition and should be removed. 3) 'always use huge car' has subject-verb agreement and count noun errors: 'people ... always use' clarifies the plural subject, 'car' should be plural 'cars', and 'huge' is acceptable but 'large' is more natural here. Suggestion: use 'I don't think so because people in my country always use large cars.' This keeps present tense and corrects subject-verb agreement and noun number.