Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and use past tense consistently. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details (e.g., what type of bike, who gave it to you, or a memory). Use correct verb forms and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle when I was about eight; my parents bought it for my birthday. I used to ride it to the park every afternoon, and it was my favourite toy because it made me feel independent.

제안: Organize your answer with a clear opinion first, then give specific reasons with linking words. Use proper sentence structure and avoid repetitions. For example, say whether bikes are popular overall, then explain exceptions (commuters, students) and give reasons (cost, traffic, public transport).

예시: I don't think bikes are very popular overall, but many people use them for short commutes. For instance, office workers and students often cycle to save money and avoid traffic, especially in smaller towns where distances are shorter.

× Yeah, sure. I have a bike. I had. I had a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, sure. I had a bike when I was a child.

The student mixes present and past tense ('I have a bike. I had. I had a bike when I was a child.') while the question asks about the past. Use past tense consistently: 'I had a bike when I was a child.' Also replace informal 'Yeah' with 'Yes' for clearer speech. Suggestion: decide the time frame asked and keep verb tense consistent.

× not exactly but And some people use a bike when they are go they going they're going to the job the job because their job is because the transportation is

✓ Not exactly. Some people use a bike when they go to work because of transportation issues.

The original sentence has fragmented and repeated phrases, incorrect verb forms ('are go', 'they going', 'they're going') and redundancy ('the job the job', 'because their job is because'). This is a sentence structure and verb form issue. Use a single clear clause: 'Some people use a bike when they go to work because of transportation issues.' Suggestions: remove repetitions, use the base verb 'go' after 'when' for habitual actions, and provide a concise reason phrase such as 'because of transportation issues.'