Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, chính xác về thì và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp, đồng thời dùng từ vựng chính xác (ví dụ: "ride" thay vì "write"). Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp, rồi thêm 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ ngắn gọn (tuổi, ai mua, kĩ năng học được) với liên từ hợp lý. Hạn chế lặp từ và sửa lỗi chia động từ để tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about five because I really loved cycling, so my parents bought one for me. I practiced a lot and soon learned how to ride confidently.

제안: Câu trả lời nên tránh nói lắp và hoàn thành ý; cần dùng liên từ để mạch lạc và cấu trúc câu đúng (ví dụ: 'in urban areas the streets are too crowded'). Cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể hơn (giao thông, cơ sở hạ tầng, thói quen) và kết luận ngắn. Tránh để câu dang dở; kiểm soát từ ngữ như 'like' và 'so' quá mức.

예시: Yes, they are quite popular, especially in rural areas where traffic is lighter and distances are short. In contrast, urban streets are often too crowded and dominated by cars and buses, which makes cycling less safe and less common.

× Of course I have one because I loved bikes when I was about five years old so I asked my parents to buy me one and then I learnt to write it and now I can write it.

✓ Of course I had one because I loved bikes when I was about five years old, so I asked my parents to buy me one and then I learned to ride it, and now I can ride it.

The student mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. The initial clause should use past tense 'had' to match 'when I was about five years old' and 'loved' and 'asked' which are past. 'Learnt/learned' is past; use the same past form. Also 'write' is incorrect verb choice—use 'ride'. Suggestion: keep events in past (had, loved, asked, learned) and use the verb 'ride' for bicycles.

× Yeah, of course, but only in rural areas. In urban areas there the streets are so like crowded and many big vehicles like the trucks and the trains.

✓ Yeah, of course, but only in rural areas. In urban areas, the streets are so crowded and there are many big vehicles like trucks and trains.

Problems: unnecessary word 'there' after 'areas', awkward filler 'so like', and incorrect article use 'the' before general nouns 'trucks' and 'trains'. Also missing 'there are' to introduce existence of vehicles. Suggestion: remove filler words, use 'there are' to state existence, and drop 'the' when referring to vehicles in general.

× So bikes cannot just ride on it so people can only ride bikes on the

✓ So bikes cannot be ridden on those roads, so people can only ride bikes in the countryside.

Sentence fragment and incorrect voice: 'bikes cannot just ride on it' is ungrammatical because bikes don't 'ride'—people ride bikes; better to use passive 'be ridden'. 'On it' is vague and 'on the' leaves sentence incomplete. Suggestion: use passive or rephrase to 'cannot be ridden on those roads' and complete the thought with a clear location like 'in the countryside'.