Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more natural, grammatically correct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one supporting detail. Use correct verb forms and articles, avoid fillers like "for sure" or incorrect word order. For example, say whether you had a bike, its color, and one brief memory or reason why it was memorable. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use linking words if adding details.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a green bike when I was a child, and I remember riding it to the park every weekend because it was light and easy to handle.

제안: Provide a clear opinion, then support it with specific, accurate information. Use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, plural forms) and simpler phrasing. Avoid vague or incorrect phrases like "estimating and specifying." If you want to mention cycling as a sport, explain how — for example, increased bike lanes, cycling events, or recreation. Limit to 2–3 sentences and use linking words such as "because" or "for example."

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for commuting and exercise. For example, cities have built more bike lanes, and there are regular cycling events that encourage people to ride.

× Yeah, for sure I had and my bike was in green.

✓ Yeah, for sure I had one, and my bike was green.

The sentence has a singular/plural and article issue: 'I had' needs an object ('one' or 'a bike') or rephrase; 'in green' is incorrect preposition and article use—use 'my bike was green.' Suggest using 'one' or 'a bike' to clarify the object and remove the preposition 'in.' Ensure complete clause after 'had.'

× Yes, of course, in my country we have a lot of bikes users and actually my country are estimating and specifying that as a sport and athletic sport.

✓ Yes, of course. In my country we have a lot of bike users, and actually my country regards cycling as a sport.

Multiple problems match the allowed list: quantifier and word-formation ('bikes users' should be 'bike users'); subject-verb agreement (treated below) and awkward phrasing. Replace 'a lot of bikes users' with 'a lot of bike users.' Simplify the second clause: 'my country regards cycling as a sport.' This corrects quantifier and noun form and improves clarity.

× Yes, of course, in my country we have a lot of bikes users and actually my country are estimating and specifying that as a sport and athletic sport.

✓ Yes, of course. In my country we have a lot of bike users, and actually my country regards cycling as a sport.

The phrase 'my country are' is incorrect because 'country' is a singular noun and requires a singular verb 'is' or 'regards.' Use 'my country regards' or 'my country is promoting.' Also 'estimating and specifying' are wrong verb choices here; use 'regards' or 'considers.' The correction uses the singular verb 'regards' to match the singular subject.