Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, clarity and concision. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, correct noun choice (bike vs scooter), and remove repetition. Add one specific detail and a linking word if needed. Keep it within 1–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a blue scooter when I was a child, and I used to ride it to my friend’s house every weekend.

제안: Make the response more direct and organized: give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific reasons with linking words (for example, because / additionally). Use more precise vocabulary (commute, convenient) and avoid vague phrases like “here and there.” Keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are an inexpensive and convenient way to commute. In addition, many people prefer bikes for short trips in crowded cities since they are easy to park and save time.

× Absolutely, I have a scooter in my childhood with the with her with her blue color.

✓ Absolutely, I had a scooter in my childhood; it was blue.

ID 6 and ID 5 apply: The sentence mixes present tense 'have' with past time phrase 'in my childhood', which is incorrect. Use past tense 'had' to match the time frame. Also there is extraneous repetition 'with the with her with her' and awkward phrasing for color; replace with 'it was blue' for clarity. Suggestion: Use past tense when referring to past time periods and keep descriptions concise. Grammar problem type IDs: 6,5

× Well bikes are very popular in the country because when people have their own bike it looks more attractive and it makes people feel happy.

✓ Well, bikes are very popular in the country because when people have their own bikes, they look more attractive and make people feel happy.

ID 1 and ID 27: 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' to agree with plural subject 'people' and generalization. Subject-verb agreement: change 'it looks' to 'they look' to match plural subject. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: Match singular/plural consistently and ensure verbs agree with their subjects. Grammar problem type IDs: 1,27

× Also it makes our life easier to travel here and there

✓ Also, it makes our lives easier to travel from place to place.

ID 6 and ID 13: 'life' should be plural 'lives' when referring to people generally. The phrase 'here and there' is informal; use 'from place to place' for clarity. Keep comma after 'Also' for flow. Suggestion: Ensure noun number matches the intended meaning and use clearer adverbial phrases for travel. Grammar problem type IDs: 6,13