Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Correct grammatical errors, keep answers concise (max 5 sentences), and include a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific supporting details using linking words. For this answer, fix verb agreement and phrasing (e.g., 'when I was a child', 'my father taught me'), avoid repetition, and finish the sentence with a specific example or memory.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father taught me to ride when I was six, so I became confident quickly. For example, I used to cycle to the park every weekend with him, which helped me practice balance and control.

제안: Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons and a linking word. Correct repetitions and complete your thought. Mention who 'most people' are and give evidence or an example (infrastructure, culture, weather).

예시: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because there are few safe cycle lanes and many cities are designed for cars. Consequently, most people prefer driving or using public transport, especially for long commutes or in bad weather.

× Yes, I had a bike when I were a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The clause refers to a single subject 'I' in the past, so the past tense form of the verb 'to be' must be 'was' not 'were'. Use 'was' for singular first-person past statements. Suggestion: remember that 'I' pairs with 'was' in past tense (I was), while 'were' is used for plural subjects and some subjunctive forms.

× I'm really good at riding a bike.

✓ I was really good at riding a bike.

Context is a past time frame (when you were a child), so the sentence should use past tense 'was' rather than present 'am'. Use consistent tense: since the question refers to childhood ('when you were a child'), describe that ability in the past.

× My father dealt me to ride a bike so I'm really good at it and

✓ My father taught me to ride a bike, so I was really good at it.

'Dealt me to ride' is incorrect word choice and structure. The correct verb is 'teach' with past form 'taught' for a past event. Also 'to ride' is the infinitive not gerund here. Because the context is past, use 'was'. The sentence also ended abruptly; add proper punctuation. Suggestion: use 'My father taught me to ride a bike' and maintain past tense.

× I think bikes are not popular in my country.

✓ I think bikes are not popular in my country.

This sentence is grammatically correct in present tense as an opinion, so no change is necessary. It fits the question about current popularity. Keep present tense for general opinions.

× There are There are not many places place to ride a bike.

✓ There are not many places to ride a bike.

The sentence contains a duplicated phrase and an extra word 'place'. Remove the repetition and the extra word to form a correct sentence. 'There are not many places to ride a bike' correctly uses 'there are' with plural 'places'.

× So I think most people

✓ So I think most people prefer other transport or don't use bikes.

This fragment is incomplete and lacks a verb and object. Provide a full clause that completes the thought. Suggestion: finish the sentence with a clear predicate, for example 'prefer other transport' or 'don't use bikes', to convey the intended meaning.