Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Clarifiez et organisez votre réponse pour qu'elle soit plus naturelle et concise. Commencez par une phrase directe, puis ajoutez un détail précis. Évitez les hésitations (« uh ») et les répétitions inutiles. Par exemple, dites l’âge exact si vous vous en souvenez, décrivez brièvement une mémoire associée, et gardez au maximum cinq phrases.

예시: Yes, I did. It was a small red bike that I received for Christmas when I was about four. I remember learning to pedal in our driveway while my father held the seat. The bright red color made it easy to spot, and I rode it every weekend with my friends.

제안: Fournissez une réponse plus nuancée et évitez les généralisations. Commencez par votre opinion claire, puis donnez deux ou three raisons spécifiques (par exemple loisir, transport, programmes locaux). Utilisez des mots de liaison pour structurer votre réponse et corrigez les erreurs grammaticales (p.ex. « bikes » et accord sujet-verbe).

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them for short commutes and children often ride them for fun, especially in parks. In addition, some cities have bike-sharing schemes which have increased their use.

× Yes, I had one. Uh, it will, it will. It was a red bike and I remember I had it at Christmas when I was like 4 or five years old.

✓ Yes, I had one. Uh, it was, it was. It was a red bike and I remember I got it at Christmas when I was about four or five years old.

The phrase 'it will, it will' is incorrect in this past narration; the student likely intended to repeat 'it was' — this is a sentence structure error and misuse of future tense form 'will'. Also 'I had it at Christmas' is acceptable but 'I got it at Christmas' is more natural to indicate receiving a gift. Use 'about four or five years old' rather than 'like 4 or five years old' for more appropriate register and consistent number form. Suggestion: keep verbs in simple past for past events, avoid using 'will' when describing past memories.

× Yeah, of course. I think bites are popular in every country in the world.

✓ Yeah, of course. I think bikes are popular in every country in the world.

The word 'bites' is a spelling error; the intended noun is 'bikes'. This is not a grammatical category mistake but a lexical error affecting sentence meaning. Suggestion: check spelling of key nouns; pronounce and write 'bike' correctly.

× Every child everywhere have a bike.

✓ Every child everywhere has a bike.

The subject 'Every child' is singular, so the verb must be singular 'has' not 'have'. This is a subject-verb agreement error. Suggestion: when subjects use 'every' + singular noun, use singular verbs (he/she/it form) and ensure verb agrees in number.