Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Bạn trả lời trực tiếp và có chi tiết cá nhân, nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp, thứ tự từ, dùng liên từ hợp lý và rút gọn câu để tự nhiên hơn. Cụ thể: (1) Tránh dùng các từ như "Oh well" trong bài thi; (2) Chỉnh thì và mạo từ (ví dụ: "at my birthday" → "on my birthday"); (3) Sử dụng liên từ để nối ý (ví dụ: "and" hoặc "so"); (4) Rút ngắn số câu xuống còn tối đa 4-5 câu rõ ràng; (5) Sửa lỗi từ vựng như "neighbours" cần dùng giới từ thích hợp: "around the neighborhood" hoặc "around the neighbours' houses".

예시: I had a bike when I was six. My dad gave it to me on my birthday, and I loved it because it made me feel joyful. I used to ride it around the neighbourhood with my friends every afternoon after school. Those rides were one of my favourite childhood memories.

제안: Câu trả lời ngắn và chứa nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, phát âm từ viết sai (buys → bikes), trật tự từ và thiếu chi tiết hỗ trợ. Cần: (1) Sửa lỗi chính tả và ngữ pháp ("I don't think bikes are popular"); (2) Dùng liên từ hợp lý và cấu trúc hoàn chỉnh (ví dụ: "because most people prefer motorbikes or cars"); (3) Bổ sung một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể hoặc lý do (ví dụ: thuận tiện cho đi lại, đường phố đông); (4) Trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích, không chỉ một câu ngắn.

예시: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer motorbikes or cars for convenience. For example, many roads are busy and distances between places can be long, so people choose faster vehicles. However, bicycles are still common for short trips or for exercise in parks.

× My dad gave it to me at my birthday.

✓ My dad gave it to me on my birthday.

The preposition for days and dates is 'on', not 'at'. Use 'on my birthday' for the correct time expression.

× Oh well I really love it because it made me feel joyful and I used to ride it around the neighbours with my friends every afternoon after school time.

✓ Oh well, I really loved it because it made me feel joyful and I used to ride it around the neighborhood with my friends every afternoon after school.

Several issues: 1) Tense consistency: when describing past habitual actions, use past tense 'loved' to match 'made' and 'used to'. 2) 'Neighbours' is a noun; the correct phrase is 'around the neighborhood' (or 'around the neighbours' houses'); 'neighborhood' is the place. 3) 'after school time' is awkward; use 'after school'.

× As my view, I don't think buys in my country are popular because people So always try ride with a motorbike or a car

✓ In my view, I don't think bikes in my country are popular because people always try to ride motorbikes or drive cars.

Corrections: 1) 'As my view' is incorrect; use 'In my view'. 2) 'buys' is a misspelling of 'bikes'. 3) Word order: 'people So always try ride' is incorrect; remove 'So' and use 'always try to' before a verb: 'try to ride'. 4) Collocations: 'ride motorbikes' and 'drive cars' are more natural than 'ride with a motorbike or a car'. 5) Maintain present simple for general truths: 'I don't think bikes ... are popular'.