Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and grammatically correct. Begin with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and avoid redundancy. Add one or two supporting details using a linking word to explain why you didn't ride much. Keep it under 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I did have a bike as a child, but I wasn't very good at riding it, so I usually walked instead. For example, I found balancing difficult, and my parents preferred I walk to nearby places for safety.

제안: Make your answer more concise and correct word choice. Start with a clear opinion, then give specific reasons and use linking words (e.g., because, however, therefore). Avoid repeating words and use plural/definite articles correctly.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular, especially among students and children, because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. However, most people prefer trains and cars for longer journeys since the rail network is extensive and faster.

× Yes I had, but I wasn't really good at riding bike so I tended to walk.

✓ Yes, I had one, but I wasn't very good at riding a bike, so I tended to walk.

The sentence has issues with article use and word choice within a past-tense context. 'Yes I had' is acceptable but sounds incomplete; adding 'one' clarifies the object. 'Riding bike' requires the indefinite article 'a bike.' 'Really good' is natural but 'very good' is a clearer collocation here. Keep past tense 'had' and 'wasn't' to match the time frame. Suggestions: add 'one' after 'had' to specify the noun, insert the article 'a' before 'bike', and use 'very' or keep 'really' consistently.

× Yes, I do, but mainly for the student or children, because in my country there is more useful transportation like trains and cars and in particular particularly the trains, very useful.

✓ Yes, I do, but mainly for students or children, because in my country there are more useful forms of transportation like trains and cars, particularly trains, which are very useful.

Several quantifier and agreement errors occur. 'The student or children' mixes singular and plural and misuses 'the'; use 'students or children' for general reference. 'There is more useful transportation' is incorrect: use plural 'there are' with 'forms of transportation' and 'more useful' should be 'more useful forms of transportation' or 'more convenient transportation options.' The phrase 'in particular particularly the trains, very useful' is redundant and ungrammatical; combine into 'particularly trains, which are very useful.' Suggestions: change singular to plural for general groups, use 'there are' for plural noun phrases, add 'forms of' for clarity, remove redundancy by using 'particularly' once and add a relative clause for clarity.

× So most of people use trains.

✓ So most people use trains.

'Most of people' is incorrect word order; the correct expression is 'most people.' When 'most' is followed directly by a plural noun, omit 'of.' This yields proper subject-verb agreement and idiomatic phrasing.