Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, clarity and coherence. Begin with a clear topic sentence that answers the question directly (e.g., “Yes, I did.” or “No, I didn’t.”). Use correct tense (simple past) and avoid extra words. If you add details, give one or two specific facts (for example when you rode it, who gave it to you, or a memory) and connect them with linking words such as “because,” “so,” or “when.” Keep your answer under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike that my parents bought me when I was seven. I used to ride it to the park every weekend because I enjoyed racing with my friends.

제안: Focus on clear grammar, correct noun forms, and logical linking. Start with a direct opinion (e.g., “Yes, bikes are very popular.”). Use plural nouns correctly (“bikes”), give specific reasons and organize them with linking words such as “because” and “for example.” Avoid redundant phrases and unclear words like “transformation” or “write it.” Limit to up to five concise sentences and provide one or two concrete examples (who uses bikes and for what).

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient. For example, many students and office workers cycle to school or work to avoid traffic, and families often use bicycles to go to parks on weekends.

× Well, I have a bike when I try and when I were a child.

✓ Well, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about the past (Did you have...), so the student should use past tense. 'Have' is present tense; 'were' is past but incorrect with 'I' in this context. Use past simple 'had' and 'was'. Also 'when I try' is irrelevant and incorrect; likely unnecessary and removed. Suggestion: answer concisely in past tense: 'I had a bike when I was a child.'

× Well, I think bike is popular in my country because a lot of students need bike to use it to a transformation to write it, go to school, go to a park, go to a garden, go to house.

✓ Well, I think bikes are popular in my country because a lot of students need bicycles to get around, go to school, visit parks or gardens, and go home.

Multiple issues fall under plural and subject-verb agreement. 'Bike' should be plural 'bikes' to match 'are popular' or use 'is popular' with 'the bike' specific — here general plural is correct. Similarly 'a lot of students need bike' should be 'need bicycles' or 'need bikes'. 'Use it to a transformation to write it' is unclear and incorrect; replaced with 'to get around'. Also 'go to house' should be 'go home'. Use plural nouns for general statements and match verbs accordingly. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general facts and clear verbs (need bicycles to get around, go to school, visit parks, and go home).