Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Melhore a gramática e a naturalidade; evite hesitações como "uh" e corrija tempos verbais. Comece com uma frase direta (topic sentence), depois acrescente detalhes específicos e use conectores simples. Por exemplo, corrija "I haven't" para "I didn't" para falar do passado, e diga a idade de forma clara. Mantenha a resposta com até 3–4 frases e sem repetições.

예시: No, I didn't. I learned to ride a bike when I was about 14, which I consider quite late. Since then I have enjoyed cycling regularly for exercise and short trips.

제안: Evite hesitações e torne as ideias mais claras e organizadas. Comece com uma resposta direta, depois explique por que as bicicletas são populares e dê exemplos concretos (como ciclovias ou cidades com infraestrutura). Use conectores como "because" ou "for example" e escolha vocabulário preciso ("cities" em vez de repetição confusa).

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for commuting and exercise. For example, larger cities have dedicated bike lanes and bike-sharing programs, which make cycling safe and convenient.

× No, I haven't.

✓ No, I didn't.

The student is referring to a past situation (having a bike as a child). English uses the simple past for completed past events, not the present perfect. Use 'didn’t' with the base verb: 'No, I didn't.' Suggestion: Use simple past (didn't have) when talking about specific past time periods.

× I just, uh, tried to learn how to ride a bike when I was about 14 and uh, I like to ride my bike today, but I learned very old.

✓ I tried to learn how to ride a bike when I was about 14, and I like to ride my bike today, but I learned quite late.

Multiple tense and word choice problems: 'just' is unnecessary for that past action; 'I like to ride my bike today' mixes present with past context but is acceptable as present for current habit; 'I learned very old' is ungrammatical — use 'learned quite late' or 'learned when I was older.' Suggestion: Keep past actions in simple past (tried, learned) and use 'quite late' or 'when I was older' for age-related descriptions.

× I was uh, teenage when I started to ride my bike.

✓ I was a teenager when I started to ride my bike.

Wrong word form: 'teenage' is an adjective and should be a noun 'teenager' with the article 'a'. Suggestion: Use 'a teenager' to describe a person's age.

× Yes, they uh, are very popular in my country uh, people like to ride bikes on the cities and have uh, uh, cycle roads for ride bikes there and there's some U burn cities, uh, have more uh, streets.

✓ Yes, they are very popular in my country. People like to ride bikes in cities, and there are cycle lanes for riding bikes. Some urban cities have more streets.

Several issues: 'on the cities' should be 'in cities' (use 'in' for being inside an area). 'Cycle roads for ride bikes' should be 'cycle lanes for riding bikes' (noun form and gerund). 'There's some U burn cities' is unclear; likely 'urban cities' or 'urban areas' — use 'urban cities' or better 'urban areas'. Also subject-verb and article issues: use 'there are' for plural. Suggestion: Use 'in cities', 'cycle lanes' and 'for riding bikes'; use 'there are' with plural nouns and 'urban areas' for clarity.