Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant and mostly natural, but it has a small grammar error and one redundant phrase. Improve accuracy by correcting word choice (“racer bikes” → “race bikes” or “race”) and tightening sentences. Add one specific detail (place or memory) and use a linking phrase to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around our neighborhood with my friends on weekends, and we often raced each other along the park path. Because the park was close to my house, these rides became our regular Saturday activity and helped me become more confident on a bike.

제안: Clear, concise and relevant answer. To improve, add a linking word to show reason or contrast and include a specific statistic, location, or brief comparison to other transport. Use varied vocabulary (e.g., “commute” or “short trips”) to demonstrate range.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in the Philippines, especially in smaller cities and rural areas. Many people use them to commute or for exercise because they are affordable and convenient, so you often see families and delivery riders using them for short trips around the neighborhood.

× For example, we would often racer bikes and have fun together.

✓ For example, we would often race bikes and have fun together.

The sentence uses 'racer' which is a noun instead of the verb 'race'. This is a word choice/verb form error. Replace 'racer' with the base verb 'race' because 'would often' requires the base form of the verb. Suggestion: use 'race' after modal-like 'would' and other auxiliaries (would often race).