Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer slightly more concise and add one specific detail or short anecdote to make it more vivid. Use a clear topic sentence, one linking word, and no more than five sentences. Avoid repeating general phrases like “a fun way” twice.

예시: Yes, I did — I had a bright red bike that I rode around our neighborhood with friends, especially on weekends. For example, we would race to the park every Saturday morning, which helped me improve my balance and confidence.

제안: Correct small grammar errors and make the explanation more specific with one linking word and a concrete reason or statistic. Keep it within five sentences and avoid vague words like “favorable.”

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in the Philippines. Many people use them for transportation, exercise, and recreation; for instance, commuters often ride bicycles to work to save money and avoid traffic, especially in smaller cities.

× Yes, I think bike are quite popular in the Philippines.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in the Philippines.

The noun 'bike' is singular but the verb 'are' requires a plural subject. Use the plural noun 'bikes' to match the plural verb for subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: use 'bikes' when speaking generally about the category or people who own them.

× Many people use them for transportation, exercise and recreation.

✓ Many people use them for transportation, exercise, and recreation.

The original sentence is grammatically acceptable but missing a serial (Oxford) comma for clarity in lists. Insert a comma before 'and' to clearly separate three items. Suggestion: include commas in lists to avoid ambiguity.

× For example, some people ride bikes to school or work because they are a favorable and convenient.

✓ For example, some people ride bikes to school or work because they are favorable and convenient.

The phrase 'a favorable and convenient' incorrectly includes the article 'a' before two adjectives describing the plural noun 'they' (bikes). Remove the article 'a' to match the plural subject. Also ensure adjective order is natural; 'favorable and convenient' is acceptable though 'convenient and economical' might be more idiomatic. Suggestion: remove the article when modifying a plural noun and choose adjectives that fit the meaning.