Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 文法と表現の自然さを改善してください。現在形と過去形が混在しているため、時制を過去形に統一し、場所の表現を簡潔にしましょう。また、詳細を一文か二文で付け加え、具体的な情報（どんな自転車だったか、誰からもらったか、どこで乗っていたか）を述べると良いです。接続語（例えば“and”“so”や“when”）を使って流れを整えてください。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that my parents gave me, and I used to ride it around the neighborhood every afternoon.

제안: 質問の語彙を正しく理解して回答してください。ここでは“bike（自転車）”について聞かれているのに“bags（バッグ）”と答えています。まず質問に対する明確な立場を述べ、その後で理由や具体例を加えてください。因果を示す接続語（for example, because, so）を使うと説得力が増します。語彙は文脈に合う単語を選びましょう。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, students and office workers often cycle to save time and avoid traffic.

× Yes, I have a bike where I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used present tense 'have' although the question asks about the past ('when you were a child'). Use past tense 'had' to match the time reference. Also 'where' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'when' to refer to time. Suggestion: replace 'have' with 'had' and 'where' with 'when' to form 'I had a bike when I was a child.'

× Yes, bags are so popular in the country.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.

The student answered about 'bags' which is likely a wrong word choice; the question asked about 'bikes'. Replace 'bags' with 'bikes'. Also 'in the country' is less natural than 'in my country', and 'so popular' is informal—use 'very popular'. Suggestion: say 'Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.'