Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and relevant to the question (bike ownership). Start with a clear topic sentence about the bike, then give 1–2 concise supporting details, using linking words to connect ideas. Avoid irrelevant words (you said “bag” instead of “bike”) and keep within 3–5 sentences. Add a specific detail (e.g., bike type, age) to make the answer more vivid.

예시: Yes. I had a bright red bicycle when I was about eight years old, and I loved it because it had a comfortable saddle and a small basket. My father gave it to me for my birthday after I’d asked for it for months, so I rode it in the park almost every day during the summer.

제안: Begin with a clear opinion, then support it with specific reasons and a brief example. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore, however) and correct grammar (e.g., “aren’t very popular” → “aren’t very popular”). Keep answers concise and avoid repetition (e.g., “commute to their destination” and “use these vehicles” is redundant).

예시: No, bicycles aren't very popular in my country because most people prefer cars or buses for convenience and to save time. For example, in big cities long distances and heavy traffic make cycling impractical, so few people choose bikes for daily commuting.

× No, there aren't very popular in my country because people always try to use their cars or public transportation to commute to their destination, and they often tend to use these vehicles rather than bikes.

✓ No, they aren't very popular in my country because people always try to use their cars or public transportation to commute to their destination, and they often tend to use these vehicles rather than bikes.

The subject 'they' (referring to 'bikes') should be used instead of 'there' which introduces existence with 'there be'. Using 'there aren't' is incorrect because the sentence is making a statement about bikes' popularity (plural subject), not stating the existence of something. Change to 'they aren't' to agree with the plural subject. Suggestion: replace 'there aren't' with 'they aren't' when referring back to a plural noun mentioned earlier.