Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Используйте правильные времена и более чёткую структуру ответа: начинайте с утверждения в правильном времени, добавьте 1–2 конкретных деталей и свяжите их логично. Избегайте повторов и ненужных междометий. Например, скажите, кем был велосипед (чей), как он выглядел и почему он вам нравился. Максимум 3–4 предложения.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It belonged to me and was bright red with a small bell and a basket. I loved it because it let me ride to my friend’s house and feel independent.

제안: Отвечайте прямо и приводите конкретные причины или примеры, используя связующие слова (например, because, for example, therefore). Избегайте пауз и повторов «uh». Сформулируйте обобщение, затем подкрепите его одним или двумя конкретными примерами или причинами. Максимум 3–4 предложения.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many people use bicycles for commuting in cities because it is inexpensive and avoids traffic. Therefore, you can see cyclists on the roads and in parks every day.

× When I was a child, I have a bike.

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike.

The sentence mixes past time expression 'When I was a child' with a present tense verb 'have'. Use past simple 'had' to match the past time frame. Suggestion: use past simple for actions or possessions that occurred in the past (e.g., 'I had a bike').

× It's was a beautiful bike actually and and all that's all.

✓ It was a beautiful bike, actually, and that's all.

There is an extra auxiliary 'It's' combined with past 'was', which is ungrammatical; also repeated 'and' and a missing comma improve clarity. Remove the incorrect 'It\'s' and keep 'It was' for past description. Suggestion: use 'It was' for past descriptions and avoid word repetition.

× In my opinion, yes, uh, bikes are popular in my country because uh, I see everyday guys who ride uh, a bike in cycling.

✓ In my opinion, yes, bikes are popular in my country because I see guys riding bikes every day.

The original sentence has awkward word order and tense/use of verbs: 'I see everyday guys who ride a bike in cycling' is unnatural. Use present simple 'I see' plus present participle 'riding' to describe habitual action, place adverb 'every day' correctly separated, and plural 'bikes' to match 'guys'. Also remove filler words. Suggestion: say 'I see guys riding bikes every day' for clear habitual observation.