Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No), then give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition, fillers (uh, but), and grammar errors (use past tense for childhood). Keep answers under five sentences and include a brief concluding remark if needed.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I couldn't ride because I had poor balance and was afraid of falling. However, as I grew older I realised bikes are useful for short trips, so I now appreciate them even though I still don't ride.

제안: Give a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons and examples. Use linking words (because, for example, therefore). Eliminate repetition and correct word choice (e.g., "ride" not "write"). Use one or two concrete examples such as commuting, deliveries, or recreational use.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them to commute short distances and avoid traffic. For example, couriers often use bicycles for deliveries, and students commonly cycle to school, which makes cycling a common and practical choice.

× No, actually I can't ride a bike and I don't want to ride a bike because I think it's difficult for me.

✓ No, actually I can't ride a bike and I don't want to ride a bike because I think it's difficult for me.

This sentence is correct in present tense for describing ability and preference, so no grammatical change is needed. Keep present simple for general ability and present continuous is not required here.

× I don't have a good balance and I think it's awful, but but uh, with my grow up, I think bike is a tool that we usually use that so I think.

✓ I don't have good balance and I think it's awful, but as I grew up, I think bikes are tools that we usually use.

Problems: incorrect phrase 'with my grow up' and singular 'bike is' used when speaking generally. Corrected tense: 'as I grew up' uses past simple to indicate change over time; 'bikes are tools' uses plural and present simple for general statements. Also removed redundancy and filler words. Suggestion: use 'as I grew up' or 'when I grew up' and use plural nouns for generalizations and omit extra 'that' and repeated words.

× Yes, I think it's popular in our country because everyone seems everyone seems can take back, but can write it back and back is a tall for uh, for transporting our to uh, our destination to the other destination.

✓ Yes, I think they're popular in our country because everyone seems to be able to take them back; bikes are a tool for transporting us to our destinations.

Multiple errors: 'it's popular' should match plural subject 'bikes' so use 'they're popular' or 'bikes are popular' (third person plural). Repeated fragment 'everyone seems everyone seems can take back' is ungrammatical; replace with 'everyone seems to be able to take them back' using infinitive 'to be able to' to express ability. 'back' and 'write' were incorrect words; 'bikes are a tool' uses singular 'a tool' okay for general classification but better to write 'bikes are a tool' or 'bikes are tools'. 'transporting our to our destination to the other destination' corrected to 'transporting us to our destinations'. Suggestion: match subject and verb number, use 'seem to' + base verb, and use correct pronouns (them/us) and clearer nouns ('destinations').

× I don't have a good balance and I think it's awful, but but uh, with my grow up, I think bike is a tool that we usually use that so I think.

✓ I don't have good balance and I think it's awful, but as I grew up, I think bikes are tools that we usually use.

Singular/plural mismatch: 'bike is a tool' can be acceptable, but when speaking generally about the category, use plural 'bikes are tools' or rephrase 'a bike is a tool' if referring to any bike. Also remove repeated words and correct tense for 'grow up'. Suggestion: use plural when making general statements about a category or use 'a' with singular count nouns correctly.

× Yes, I think it's popular in our country because everyone seems everyone seems can take back, but can write it back and back is a tall for uh, for transporting our to uh, our destination to the other destination.

✓ Yes, I think they're popular in our country because everyone seems to be able to take them back; bikes are a tool for transporting us to our destinations.

Pronoun errors: 'it' and 'back' were incorrectly used where plural pronoun 'them' and object pronoun 'us' are needed. Use 'them' to refer to bikes and 'us' for people being transported. Also fix verb structure 'seems to be able to' for ability. Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents and use object pronouns after verbs/prepositions.