Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, tense consistency and sentence clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence (past tense), then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct common errors: use past tense consistently, remove redundant words, and use appropriate verbs (e.g., “ride” instead of “walk” when referring to a bike).

예시: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle that was my favorite because it was very fast and light. For example, I used to ride it to school and often cycled with a friend almost every day after classes.

제안: Make your opinion sentence clear and use linking words to support it. Use appropriate grammar (subject-verb agreement) and avoid repetition. Provide specific groups/examples and a brief reason to make the answer more informative.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are still quite popular in my country. In rural provinces many children and young people prefer to ride bikes to school because they are inexpensive and practical for short distances.

× Yes I did, I have one that which is my favorite.

✓ Yes, I did. I had one that was my favorite.

Article errors and related tense/structure: the original uses present tense 'have' while the question asks about childhood (past). Use past tense 'had'. Also 'that which' is ungrammatical and redundant; use 'that was' or 'which was'. Add commas and separate into two sentences for clarity.

× I try to school to go for a walk with my friend almost every day.

✓ I used to ride it to school and go for a walk with my friend almost every day.

Tense and verb form: the activity refers to a habitual past action, so use 'used to' or past simple. The original word order and verbs are incorrect ('try to school to go' is wrong). Also 'ride it to school' clarifies the action of using a bike. The correction uses correct past habitual structure and clear verb sequence.

× I think that bike still popular for still popular in my country because some people or some children or young people in the province, they prefer bike for them to go to school by themselves.

✓ I think bikes are still popular in my country because some people, especially children and young people in the provinces, prefer to ride bikes to school by themselves.

Subject-verb agreement and tense: 'bike still popular' lacks the verb 'are' and should be plural 'bikes' to match general statement. The original repeats 'still popular' and uses awkward phrases ('prefer bike for them to go'). Correction adds 'are', uses plural noun, removes repetition, and uses the correct infinitive 'prefer to ride bikes' and clearer noun phrase 'in the provinces'.