Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不自然且有语法错误。应直接回答并用一到两句补充细节，比如什么时候得到、骑车的频率或印象，使用正确的时态和连词。保持答案不超过5句，避免重复。

예시: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven, and I rode it almost every day around my neighborhood. It helped me feel independent and made it easy to visit friends after school.

제안: 回答过于简短，缺乏具体支持细节。应先直接回答，然后用一到两句解释原因或举例，使用连接词使回答更连贯。保持简洁但具体。

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular, especially in cities with heavy traffic. Many people use them for short commutes because they are cheap, healthy and convenient.

× Yes, I had a bike when I am I. I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

句子中应使用过去时来描述过去发生的事情。“when I am I” 是错误和多余的短语。正确表达为 “when I was a child”（当我是个孩子的时候）。建议：描述过去经历时全部使用过去时态（例如：had / was），并删除多余词语。