Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, clarity and conciseness. Use correct tense (had, not did had), avoid redundant phrases, and keep answer to 2–3 clear sentences. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one specific detail (e.g., color, how long you used it, or a memorable moment) using a linking word.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a bright blue model that I rode every day for about five years, and I remember learning to ride it on the sidewalk near my home.

제안: Make your opinion clear and support it with one or two specific reasons. Avoid vague phrases and repetition. Use linking words (for example, however, because) and correct grammar (e.g., "I don't think they are popular"). Keep to 2–3 sentences and provide a short example or statistic if possible.

예시: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because most people prefer motorbikes and cars. However, children often learn to ride bikes between ages three and ten in other countries, where cycling is promoted for health and transport.

× Yes, I actually did had a bike when I was a child and it was a Big Blue bike that I've ever gotten in my life and I did not change it from then on.

✓ Yes, I actually had a bike when I was a child, and it was the biggest, bluest bike I ever got in my life, and I did not change it after that.

The auxiliary did should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the past tense (did had → had). 'I've ever gotten' is awkward here; use simple past 'I ever got' for a past life experience. 'Big Blue bike' is a noun phrase that needs articles and appropriate adjective order; 'the biggest, bluest bike' fits the intended emphasis. 'From then on' is informal; 'after that' is clearer. Suggestion: use base verbs after did (did + base), use simple past for completed past events, and include appropriate articles and adjective order.

× And then I switched the motorcycles and then get I got a car.

✓ Then I switched to motorcycles, and later I got a car.

Word order and verb forms are incorrect: 'switched the motorcycles' should be 'switched to motorcycles' (preposition use) and 'get I got a car' is ungrammatical; use 'later I got a car' for sequence in the past. Suggestion: use 'switched to' for changing modes of transport and keep verbs in simple past for past actions.

× Honestly I don't think it is popular but in almost every other country it is popular in one year in age of three to 10 just to Start learning some some different thing and do a multitask.

✓ Honestly, I don't think it is popular in my country, but in many other countries it is popular for children aged three to ten to start learning different things and to develop multitasking skills.

Problems include incorrect reference ('it is popular' should refer to 'bikes in my country'), awkward time/age phrasing ('in one year in age of three to 10'), repetition 'some some', incorrect capitalization 'Start', and unclear phrase 'do a multitask'. Use 'children aged three to ten' for age range, 'start learning different things' for correct gerund use, and 'develop multitasking skills' for the intended meaning. Suggestion: use clear age expressions, avoid repetition, and use gerunds or infinitives appropriately ('to start', 'to develop').

× But I don't think it is popular in my country.

✓ But I don't think bikes are popular in my country.

Pronoun reference is unclear: 'it' should refer to 'bikes', which is plural, so use 'bikes are' rather than 'it is'. Also maintain consistency with earlier clause. Suggestion: match pronouns with their antecedents in number and be explicit when referring back to a plural noun.