Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is too short and vague. Begin with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add one or two brief supporting details (age, how you used the bike, or a memory). Use linking words like “and” or “so” to make the response coherent. Keep it natural and within 3–5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I did — I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven years old. I used it to ride around my neighborhood with friends, and it helped me feel independent. I remember learning to ride without training wheels on a sunny afternoon, which was really exciting.

제안: This reply avoids the question and is uninformative. Give a direct opinion first (yes/no/partly), then support it with specific reasons or examples (urban commuting, exercise, traffic, or bike-sharing schemes). Use linking words like “because”, “for example”, or “however” to connect ideas. Keep it concise (2–4 sentences).

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in cities you can see lots of commuters and students cycling to work or school, and bike-sharing programs have become more common in recent years.

× Yeah, that's right.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked a past-tense question (Did you have a bike when you were a child?). The student replied with a vague conversational confirmation 'Yeah, that's right,' which does not explicitly address having had a bike. This is a present-tense/affirmation mismatch. Use a direct past-tense response to match the question: 'Yes, I did.' This clearly affirms possession in the past. Suggestion: Reply with a clear past-tense short answer (Yes, I did) or a full sentence (Yes, I had a bike when I was a child).

× I never thought about it.

✓ I have never thought about it.

The examiner asked about the general popularity of bikes in the present. The student's simple past 'I never thought about it' implies a completed past action and may sound slightly off for a present-state opinion. Using the present perfect 'I have never thought about it' links past experience to the present and is more natural when indicating up-to-now lack of consideration. Suggestion: Use present perfect to express that up to now you have not considered the topic, or give a direct opinion in present tense (I don't really know if bikes are popular in my country).