Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be careful with tense and expand slightly. Use past tense for past experience, give a brief topic sentence and one supporting detail. Keep it natural and concise (max 5 sentences).

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven, and I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon. It helped me learn balance and gave me more freedom to explore my neighborhood.

제안: Make your answer more natural and grammatically correct: use plural/singular agreement, avoid casual fillers, and add a specific reason or example with a linking word. Keep it under five sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular, especially among commuters. For example, many people cycle to work because bicycles are inexpensive and often faster than cars in heavy traffic. As a result, cycling is a common and practical choice in cities.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' which is in the past tense. The student's reply 'Yes, I have.' uses present tense and is inconsistent. Use the past tense 'did' to match the question. Suggestion: respond using past tense verbs for past-time questions (e.g., 'Yes, I did' or 'Yes, I had a bike').

× Yeah, it's popular, especially for the commuters, it's reliable to use.

✓ Yes, they are popular, especially with commuters; they are reliable to use.

The student uses singular 'it's' to refer to plural 'bikes' and incorrectly includes the definite article 'the' with 'commuters'. This causes pronoun and article agreement errors. Also, two clauses run together with comma splice. Use plural pronouns 'they' to match 'bikes', use 'commuters' without 'the' for general reference, and separate clauses properly (semicolon or conjunction). Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents and avoid unnecessary articles; connect independent clauses correctly (e.g., '..., and they are...').