Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: You did not answer the question. For Part 1 you must respond directly with a short, natural statement. Start with a topic sentence saying whether you had a bike, then add one or two brief supporting details (where/how often you used it, a memory, or why you liked it). Keep it under five sentences and use simple linking such as “and” or “because.”

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it almost every day to ride to my friend’s house and to the park, and I remember practicing balancing until I could ride without training wheels. Because it was my main way of getting around, I became quite confident on it.

제안: You did not answer the question. Give a clear opinion first (yes or no), then support it with specific reasons or examples. Use a linking word like “because” or “for example” to make your answer coherent, and keep it concise (maximum five sentences). Mention who uses bikes and in what situations to show specificity.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. For example, many people use bicycles to commute short distances because traffic is heavy and bikes are cheaper than cars. Additionally, cycling is promoted by local authorities with bike lanes and rental schemes, which makes it more common.

× Student:

✓ Student: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original response is missing (sentence structure error: no verb or content). Provide a full sentence that answers the past-tense question. Use past simple 'had' to match 'Did you have... when you were a child?' and include subject 'I' and auxiliary omitted in short answers is acceptable, but a full sentence is clearer. Suggestion: form a complete past-tense statement: 'I had a bike when I was a child.'

× Student:

✓ Student: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country.

The original response is missing (sentence structure/present tense). The question asks about current popularity, so use present simple 'are' for general facts. Include subject 'I' and verb 'think' in present simple and describe 'bikes are popular.' Suggest adding an adverb like 'quite' or 'very' if appropriate. Example: 'I think bikes are quite popular in my country.'