Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Khuyến nghị: Bạn nên nói câu trả lời rõ ràng, dùng thì đúng (quá khứ khi nói về quá khứ), tránh lặp từ và loại bỏ tiếng ặng (uh). Thêm một câu chủ đề ngắn, rồi một hoặc hai chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể (ai tặng, khi nào, nhớ kỷ niệm nhỏ). Sử dụng liên từ đơn giản để mạch lạc (for example, because, and). Cố gắng không quá 5 câu tổng cộng. Ví dụ các điểm cần sửa cụ thể: thay "have" bằng "had", "buyer" sửa thành "bicycle", "in a child" sửa thành "when I was a child", dùng "my father bought it" thay cho "my father buy it".

예시: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child because my father bought it for me. He often helped me learn to ride it in the park near our house. I remember practicing every weekend until I felt confident. It was one of my favorite childhood memories.

제안: Khuyến nghị: Cần trình bày rõ ràng ý kiến chính lúc đầu, dùng từ vựng phù hợp (ví dụ: popular, affordable, convenient). Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ sai ("deep" không đúng, "write" sai ý). Thêm một hoặc hai lý do cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để nối ý (for example, because, and). Giữ tổng cộng không quá 5 câu. Các điểm cần sửa: nói "Bikes are popular in my country, especially in cities like Dubai" (nếu đúng), hoặc tránh đưa thông tin không chính xác; dùng "affordable" thay cho "so deep"; nói "students can easily ride to school" thay cho "write".

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in some cities. They are affordable and convenient for short journeys. For example, many students ride their bikes to school because it is quicker than walking and cheaper than taking public transport.

× Yes, I uh, have a buyer in a child because uh, my father buy it, uh, for me and he uh, help me, uh, ride a bicycle.

✓ Yes, I had a bicycle as a child because my father bought it for me and he helped me learn to ride it.

The student used present tense verbs ('have', 'buy', 'help') while describing a past situation. Use past tense for actions that happened in the past: 'had', 'bought', 'helped'. Also replace awkward phrases: 'a buyer in a child' is incorrect; use 'a bicycle as a child'. Use 'learn to ride' or 'learned to ride' for clarity. Suggestions: practice forming regular and irregular past tense forms and choose past tense when describing past experiences.

× Yes in my country Dubai is popular because it is so deep and most people can buy it and and the student and pupil can easily write, go to the school.

✓ Yes, bicycles are popular in my country because they are affordable and most people can buy them, and students can easily ride them to school.

Multiple errors: the student used 'Dubai is popular' and 'it is so deep' incorrectly. The question asks if 'bikes' are popular, so the subject should be 'bicycles' and plural. Use present simple correctly for general facts: 'are popular', 'are affordable', 'can buy them'. 'So deep' is wrong meaning; likely intended 'so cheap' or 'affordable'. 'Student and pupil' is redundant; use 'students'. 'Write, go to the school' is incorrect; intended 'ride them to school'. Suggestions: ensure subject matches topic, use plural nouns for general statements, choose appropriate adjectives ('cheap'/'affordable'), and use verbs that match intended actions ('ride to school').