Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Expand your answer to make it natural and informative. Start with a clear topic sentence saying whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific supporting details (e.g., type of bike, how often you rode it, who taught you). Use a linking word to connect ideas. Keep it concise (no more than 5 sentences).

예시: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels that my parents bought me for my sixth birthday, and I used to ride it around the neighborhood almost every afternoon. Because my older brother taught me, I learned to ride without the training wheels within a few weeks, which felt like a big achievement.

제안: Provide an opinion with reasons and at least one specific example to support it. Begin with a topic sentence stating your view, then use linking words (for example, because, therefore) to give reasons such as transport, culture, or infrastructure. This will make your answer more convincing and coherent. Keep responses natural and avoid one-word answers.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, cities have dedicated bike lanes and bike-sharing programs, so students and office workers often cycle to work or university to avoid traffic and save money.

× Yes.

✓ Yes, I did.

The original response 'Yes.' is grammatically acceptable in casual speech but lacks the explicit verb required to fully answer the past-tense question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?'. This is a sentence structure issue because the reply omits the auxiliary 'did' and the subject for a full sentence. Suggestion: Provide a short full sentence matching the question's tense, for example 'Yes, I did.' or 'Yes, I had a bike.'

× Yes.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The original single-word reply 'Yes.' is too short and does not mirror the present-tense question 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?'. This is a present tense and sentence structure problem because the response should state an opinion in present tense. Suggestion: Use a complete present-tense sentence such as 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.' or add brief elaboration like 'Yes, many people use them.'