Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer grammatically correct, concise, and include a clear topic sentence plus one supporting detail. Use past tense consistently and link ideas with a short connector. Limit to 2–3 sentences to sound natural.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. However, I did not use it very often because my siblings shared it, so I usually had to wait my turn.

제안: Start with a clear direct statement, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (because, so, during). Use present tense for general facts and be precise about timing and numbers if possible. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and finish the thought.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people find commuting difficult and expensive. During the pandemic, for example, more people started cycling to avoid crowded public transport, so bicycle use increased noticeably.

× Yes I do have a bike when I was a child but I didn't get to always use it because I have other siblings that using it.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but I didn't always get to use it because my siblings used it.

This sentence mixes present and past tenses. The student is talking about childhood, so use past simple (had, didn't get to use). 'I do have' is present and incorrect for past context. Also 'have other siblings that using it' is ungrammatical: use the past simple 'used' or a relative clause with 'who used it.' 'Always' should be placed before the main verb 'get to use' (or rephrase as 'didn't always get to use it'). Suggestion: keep consistent past tense for events in the past and use correct verb forms for relative clauses and simple past actions.

× I do think that it is popular since a lot of people in my country had a hard time commuting.

✓ I think it is popular since a lot of people in my country have a hard time commuting.

The sentence mixes present opinion with past tense 'had.' The speaker's general statement about popularity and current commuting difficulties should use present simple ('have a hard time'). Also 'I do think' is acceptable but unnecessary; 'I think' is more natural. Suggestion: use present simple for general truths and habits.

× So a lot of people depend on bike and during pandemic a lot of people start getting in

✓ So a lot of people depend on bikes, and during the pandemic many people started using them.

Several issues: 'depend on bike' needs plural 'bikes' or 'a bike' depending on meaning; here plural is appropriate. 'During pandemic' needs the definite article 'the pandemic.' The second clause uses present 'start getting in' but should refer to the past period of the pandemic, so use past simple 'started.' 'Getting in' is vague; use 'using them' to refer clearly to bikes. Suggestion: use correct article 'the pandemic,' match singular/plural forms, and keep verb tenses consistent (past simple for actions during the pandemic).