Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and relevant to the question, avoid gender stereotypes and filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No), give one or two concise supporting details, use linking words if needed, and keep it under five sentences. Also correct grammar (use past tense and articles) and choose neutral phrasing.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I collected dolls and spent most of my free time playing with them. Because I lived in a small apartment, I couldn’t ride much outdoors, so toys were my main pastime.

제안: Provide a clear opinion with specific supporting details and avoid overgeneralisation. Use correct grammar (plural forms, articles) and link a reason or example to your opinion. Keep answers concise and natural-sounding.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and recreation. For example, in my city you can see parents teaching children to ride in parks on weekends, and there are many bike rental stations near the river.

× Uh, no actually I am a girl so I don't have the bike but I have a lot of collections of dolls like girls toys.

✓ Uh, no. Actually, I am a girl, so I don't have a bike, but I have a large collection of dolls and girls' toys.

The original sentence misuses 'the bike' (article error) and 'collections' (plural noun form) and lacks possession for 'girls toys'. According to the provided list, the primary issue is incorrect use of pronouns/possessive form and related article/number choices. Use 'a bike' for a nonspecific singular noun. Use 'a large collection' (singular) or 'collections' only if multiple collections exist; here 'collection' is more natural. Use the possessive apostrophe in 'girls' toys' to show the toys belong to girls. Also add punctuation and a small pause for clarity. Suggestion: practice articles ('a' vs 'the') and possessive forms (girl's/girls') and countable noun agreement.

× Yes, I firmly believe that biking is very popular in my country. Every single boys have bikes because it's about their passion.

✓ Yes, I firmly believe that biking is very popular in my country. Every single boy has a bike because it is part of his passion.

The error is subject-verb agreement and number: 'Every single boys have' mixes singular 'every' with plural 'boys' and uses the plural verb 'have'. With 'every' the noun should be singular ('boy') and the verb should be singular ('has'). Also 'bikes' can be singular in this structure ('a bike') to match 'every single boy'. 'It's about their passion' is vague and mismatches singular antecedent; change to 'it is part of his passion' or use plural form consistently ('All boys have bikes because they are passionate about cycling'). Suggestion: review rules for 'every/every single' which require singular nouns and verbs, and ensure pronoun agreement with antecedent (singular vs plural).