Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your response does not answer the examiner’s question — instead you repeated or asked a different question, which breaks the Basic Structure rule. Focus on answering directly with a short topic sentence (yes/no or a brief statement) and add up to two supporting details using linking words. Keep answers natural, relevant and concise (no more than 5 sentences). For example, begin with a clear statement about whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific details (when you got it, how you used it, or a memory).

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I received it for my seventh birthday, and I used it to ride to school and to the park every weekend. Because it was light and easy to handle, I learned to ride quickly and felt very independent.

제안: You repeated the examiner’s question instead of answering. Always respond directly with your opinion and support it with specific reasons or examples using linking words (for example, “because,” “however,” “for instance”). Keep the answer focused and concise—one topic sentence plus one or two brief supporting details. This shows Natural & Effective use of English and meets the Basic Structure criteria.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, cities have started adding bike lanes and rental schemes, so more commuters and students choose cycling as an affordable and healthy option.

× Did you have a bag when you were you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Issues: repeated phrase 'you were' and wrong object 'bag' instead of 'bike' which does not match Examiner's question. Grammar problem types: 26 Sentence structure errors (repetition) and 12 Incorrect use of pronouns/word choice. Reason: The student accidentally repeated 'you were' creating a structural error and used 'bag' which changes meaning; likely they intended to repeat the Examiner's word 'bike'. Suggestion: Remove the duplicated words to form a single clause 'when you were a child' and use the correct noun 'bike' to match the topic. Practice by reading the question slowly, focusing on not repeating phrases and echoing key nouns from the question when answering or repeating it.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

This sentence is grammatically correct. It uses the present simple to ask about a general opinion and correctly uses the plural 'bikes' and the adjective 'popular'. No change needed. Suggestion: Answer using present simple (e.g., 'Yes, I think bikes are very popular because...').