Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear, relevant and gives good context and specific detail (distance, reason). To improve, make the response slightly more concise and add a linking word to connect ideas smoothly. Also avoid minor redundancy (e.g., 'relied on my bike' and 'cycling was really convenient' say similar things). Aim for 3–4 sentences and include a brief personal feeling or memory to enrich the answer.

예시: Yes — I did. I grew up in the countryside where public transport was limited, so I often cycled the two-kilometre route to elementary school. Because of that, I became a confident cyclist and remember enjoying the fresh morning air on those rides.

제안: The answer addresses the question and gives reasons, but contains small grammar and word-choice errors ('student' → 'students', 'used for useful for', 'many people chose' → 'choose'). Improve coherence by using linking words (for example, 'because' and 'therefore') and provide one specific example (e.g., commuting or delivery services) to strengthen your point. Keep sentences natural and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular, especially among students and urban residents. Because they are inexpensive and often faster for short journeys, many people choose bikes to commute to work or to make quick errands; for instance, delivery riders often prefer bikes in busy city centres.

× Yes, I'd say they're quite popular, especially among student and people living in urban areas.

✓ Yes, I'd say they're quite popular, especially among students and people living in urban areas.

The noun 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with 'among' which indicates a group. Use plural form when referring to members of a group in general. Suggestion: change singular nouns to plural when speaking about people in a category (among students).

× They're relatively cheap and convenient, and they're also used for useful for avoiding traffic, so many people chose bikes for short trips.

✓ They're relatively cheap and convenient, and they're also useful for avoiding traffic, so many people choose bikes for short trips.

There are two issues: the phrase 'used for useful for' is redundant and ungrammatical; remove 'used for' or 'useful for' and keep 'useful for'. Also tense/verb choice: 'chose' is past tense but the context is general present, so use present simple 'choose'. Suggestions: eliminate redundancy ('also useful for avoiding traffic') and use present simple when stating general facts ('many people choose').