Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a direct, concise topic sentence about whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific supporting details (age, who gave it to you, how often you rode it). Use linking words like 'and' or 'because' to make the answer coherent. Keep it under five sentences and avoid filler words (umm, uh).

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and I used it to ride to school and the park almost every day.

제안: The answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and repetition. Start with a clear opinion (Yes/No), then explain why with specific reasons and one example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' to structure your response. Replace vague words ('basic', 'purpley') with precise vocabulary (common, affordable, practical). Limit to 2–3 sentences to be natural and effective.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use bicycles to commute to work or to go to the market, especially in crowded cities where traffic is heavy.

× Yes, I think that umm bike is purpley in my country because umm, in my country is uh, is so basic, so basic and everyone umm, everyone.

✓ Yes, I think that bikes are popular in my country because cycling is quite common and everyone uses them.

Errors: incorrect article usage ('that umm bike' should be plural or use 'the/a'), missing subject for 'is' in 'in my country is uh', and awkward repetition and nonstandard adjective 'purpley'. According to the Article errors category, the singular article use is wrong here because the student refers to bikes in general. Also there is a sentence structure problem but only article errors and number agreement are corrected per the list. Correction uses plural 'bikes' and a clear clause: 'bikes are popular in my country' which matches the present-tense general statement. Suggestion: Use plural nouns or appropriate articles when speaking about general categories (e.g., 'bikes are', 'a bike is'), avoid filler words, and use standard adjectives ('popular' instead of 'purpley').