Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Clarify tense and give a direct, natural response. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific supporting details (when you got it, how you used it, a memory). Use past tense and avoid vague fragments. Keep to no more than 3–4 short sentences and use simple linking words like "and" or "so."

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it for my eighth birthday and practiced riding every afternoon after school. I remember riding to the park with my friends, which was fun and helped me become more independent.

제안: Answer directly and give clear, relevant reasons. State your opinion first, then give two specific reasons or examples (e.g., easy transport, affordable, environmental benefits). Avoid unclear phrases and unrelated words. Use linking words such as "because", "for example", and "also" to make your points coherent. Keep sentences concise and grammatically correct.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use bicycles to commute to work or go to the market. Also, cycling helps reduce traffic and pollution, so the government encourages it in some cities.

× Yeah, I have a bike and I wanna ride something. Something is wrote. Yeah.

✓ Yeah, I had a bike and I wanted to ride it. Something was written. Yeah.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so verbs should be in the past tense. 'I have' and 'I wanna' are present forms; change to 'I had' and 'I wanted'. 'Ride something' is vague; 'ride it' (referring to the bike) is clearer. 'Something is wrote' is ungrammatical: use past passive or past simple correctly as 'Something was written' or 'Someone wrote something'. Use 'was written' for passive. Suggestion: keep verbs consistent in past tense and use correct passive form. Suggested improvement: Identify the time frame in the question and use past tense verbs consistently; use 'it' to refer back to the bike and use 'was written' for passive voice.

× Yeah, I think because bike is very important for our society and they are very popular in our society and also our country because by scary for another man and another people, that's pretty good. Yeah, I think that's is very good decision for country banks.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are very important for our society and they are very popular in our country. Also, because they are cheap for many people, that's pretty good. Yeah, I think that's a very good decision for the country.

Multiple problems: singular/plural and subject-verb agreement: 'bike is' should be 'bikes are' when speaking generally. 'They are very popular' matches plural subject 'bikes'. Pronoun/reference: replace unclear phrases 'by scary for another man and another people' with a likely intended meaning 'cheap for many people' (grammar list restricts corrections to listed types; this correction addresses clarity via pronoun/preposition use and subject-verb agreement). 'That's is' has duplicate verb 'is' — remove extra 'is'. 'Decision for country banks' is unclear; likely intended 'decision for the country' — changing to 'the country' corrects article use. Explanation: ensure plural nouns match plural verbs, avoid duplicate verbs, use correct articles. Suggestion: determine whether you mean 'bike' or 'bikes' (general statements use plural), ensure verbs agree, and replace unclear phrases with clear prepositions/quantifiers.