Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a direct but fuller response: start with a topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two specific details (where you rode it, who gave it to you, or a memorable experience). Keep it natural, within 3–4 sentences, and use simple linking words like "and" or "so" for coherence.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me for my eighth birthday, and I used to ride it every afternoon around the park near our house. It helped me become more confident and I remember falling a few times but always getting back up.

제안: Answer directly, then explain with clear reasons and specific examples. Avoid unclear phrasing like "they do challenge sometime on the street." Use linking words such as "because," "for example," or "however" to make your point logical. Keep answers to 2–4 sentences and use appropriate vocabulary (e.g., "popular," "convenient," "safety issues").

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and to save money on transport. For example, in cities you often see cyclists commuting to work, although sometimes roads are crowded and this causes safety problems.

× Yes, of course they do challenge sometime on the street.

✓ Yes, of course they sometimes cause problems on the street.

The original sentence uses the pronoun 'they' vaguely and the verb phrase 'do challenge' is unnatural here. 'Bikes' is the subject implied by the question, so 'they' could refer to bikes but the collocation is incorrect. Also 'sometime' is the wrong form and position; 'sometimes' (an adverb) should be used before the verb. Replacing 'do challenge' with 'cause problems' makes the meaning clear and natural. Suggestion: use a clear subject reference and natural verb collocations, place adverbs like 'sometimes' before the main verb: 'they sometimes cause problems on the street.'

× Yes, of course they do challenge sometime on the street.

✓ Yes, of course they sometimes cause problems on the street.

The adverb 'sometimes' was written as 'sometime' and placed at the end, which is incorrect. 'Sometimes' should be used to modify the verb and normally appears before the main verb or between auxiliary and main verb. Also the phrase 'do challenge' is not a natural collocation for this meaning; 'cause problems' is more idiomatic. Suggestion: place adverbs correctly and choose idiomatic verb phrases.