Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a direct topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details (where you rode it, who taught you, or a memorable experience). Keep it natural and concise, no more than five sentences, and use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood every evening because my parents encouraged me to play outside. My older brother taught me to balance by running alongside me until I felt confident, so I remember learning to ride as a fun family activity.

제안: Start with a clear opinion (yes or no), then support it with one or two specific reasons or examples (e.g., commuting, cost, cycling infrastructure). Use linking words like "because", "for example" or "however" to make your response coherent and limit to five sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are fairly popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, cities have dedicated bike lanes and bike-sharing programs, so students and office workers often choose cycling to avoid traffic and save money.

× Blah blah.

✓ I had a bicycle when I was a child.

The original 'Blah blah.' is a placeholder and not a grammatical sentence. Replace with a full, past-tense sentence to answer 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' Use the past simple 'had' for possession in the past and include a clear subject and object. Suggestion: provide a complete clause with subject 'I' + past verb 'had' + object 'a bicycle'.

× Blah blah blah blah.

✓ Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in cities and among students.

The original 'Blah blah blah blah.' is a placeholder and not a grammatical response. The question asks about current popularity, so use the present simple 'are' for a general fact and provide specifics. Include subject 'bicycles' + verb 'are' and modifiers 'quite popular' and a brief qualifier. Suggestion: answer with a full sentence using present simple and add a reason or detail to make the reply natural.