Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, clarity and structure. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question in the past (e.g. "No, I didn't have my own bike as a child."). Correct verb forms and word order (use "borrow from my cousin", not "borrow to"). Add one brief supporting detail and use a linking word if needed. Keep the answer under five sentences.

예시: No, I didn't have my own bike as a child. However, I often borrowed one from my cousin because he had a spare. As a result, I learned to ride on quiet neighborhood streets and enjoyed cycling with him on weekends.

제안: Make the answer grammatically correct and coherent. Begin with a clear opinion ("Yes, I think bikes are popular"). Use linking words to add supporting details ("because", "for example"). Give a specific reason or example—mention infrastructure or cultural habits—and avoid repetition. Limit to three sentences max.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because many people use them for short trips. For example, my city has designated bike lanes and bike-sharing stations, which makes cycling convenient and safe. Because of this infrastructure, a lot of commuters and students choose to cycle daily.

× I haven't, but I was able to borrow to my cousin 'cause he had one.

✓ I didn't, but I was able to borrow one from my cousin because he had one.

This sentence has multiple issues: incorrect tense choice and incorrect preposition usage. 'I haven't' is present perfect and incomplete here; the question asked about the past ('Did you have'), so use past simple 'I didn't'. 'Borrow to my cousin' is wrong because we borrow something from someone, not to someone; correct preposition is 'from'. Also the contraction and colloquial ' 'cause ' should be 'because' in formal speech. Suggestion: match the tense to the question (past simple), use the correct preposition 'from', and avoid colloquial contractions in formal answers.'

× I think so it is because I see a lot of bikers we we even have a designated bike lane and. Most people here.

✓ I think so because I see a lot of bikers; we even have a designated bike lane, and most people here use bikes.

This original response has sentence structure and tense issues. 'I think so it is' contains incorrect word order; the correct order is 'I think so' or 'I think it is'. The clause 'we we even have' repeats a word and is fragmented; combine ideas with proper punctuation. The final fragment 'Most people here.' lacks a verb (sentence without a verb). Also maintain present simple tense for habitual facts: 'I see', 'we have', and 'most people here use bikes.' Suggestion: remove repetition, fix word order, add a verb to the final clause, and use punctuation to connect related ideas.'