Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and natural phrasing, shorten redundant parts, and add a clear topic sentence plus one specific detail. Correct tense and possession (e.g., “It belonged to my brother”). Use linking words like “so” or “and” briefly. Keep answer within 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes — I had a bike when I was a child; it belonged to my older brother, so I used to borrow it often. We rode it around our neighborhood every afternoon, and I practiced simple tricks on the sidewalk until I felt confident.

제안: Make the response more fluent and correct vocabulary/grammar: say why they are popular and give a specific example. Avoid fillers and repetition. Use one linking word (e.g., “because” or “for example”) to connect reason and example. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient. For example, many university students ride bikes to campus every day to avoid traffic and save money.

× It's belonged to my brother.

✓ It belonged to my brother.

The student used the past participle 'belonged' with 'It’s' (it is), producing an incorrect tense and form. The intended simple past is 'belonged' without the contraction 'it is.' Use 'It belonged to my brother' to describe possession in the past. Suggestion: remove the incorrect 'it’s' and use simple past for completed past ownership.

× Most of people ride ride bikes to UH.

✓ Most people ride bikes to UH.

The phrase 'Most of people' incorrectly uses the preposition 'of' with 'people.' For a general plural noun, use 'most people.' Also there is a duplicated word 'ride.' Correct to 'Most people ride bikes to UH.' Suggestion: use 'most people' for general groups and avoid word repetition.

× It used as a transport uh for a lot of students, especially at the university or college.

✓ It is used as a means of transport by a lot of students, especially at university or college.

The original lacks the proper passive auxiliary verb and uses 'used' without 'is,' producing wrong structure. Use the passive 'is used' to indicate common use. Also 'transport' is better preceded by 'means of' and 'by a lot of students' clarifies the agent. 'At the university or college' is awkward; 'at university or college' is more natural. Suggestion: use passive voice with 'is used' and prefer 'means of transport' and 'by' to indicate who uses it.