Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a full, natural answer: start with a topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add 1–2 supporting details (where you got it, how often you used it, or a brief memory). Use linking words to connect ideas and keep it under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I did — I had a red bicycle when I was about eight years old. I rode it almost every day to visit friends and explore my neighborhood, which helped me feel more independent. Because my parents lived nearby, I often cycled with my younger sister and we enjoyed racing each other on quiet streets.

제안: Answer the question directly and avoid unrelated comments. Begin with a clear opinion, then support it with specific reasons or examples (e.g., common uses, infrastructure, or cultural trends). Use linking words (for example, because, furthermore, however) to make your response coherent and concise.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, cities have dedicated bike lanes and affordable bike-sharing schemes, so students and office workers often choose cycling to avoid traffic and save money.

× Yes.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked a past-tense question ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?') requiring a full response using past tense. A single-word 'Yes.' is short but acceptable in informal speech; however to be grammatically complete and to match the question's tense, use 'Yes, I did.' This provides an explicit subject and auxiliary verb and clarifies the connection to the question. Suggestion: Respond with a complete clause that repeats the auxiliary when answering past simple questions (e.g., 'Yes, I did' or 'No, I didn’t').

× Yes, I was lonely.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The examiner asked 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' which is a present-tense opinion question. The student's reply 'Yes, I was lonely.' is unrelated and does not answer the question. This is a sentence-meaning/content error rather than a pure grammatical form error; it does not match the needed tense or content. The corrected sentence provides an appropriate present-tense opinion that directly answers the question. Suggestion: Answer the question directly in the expected tense and topic (e.g., 'Yes, I think so' or 'Yes, many people use bikes in my country').