Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer more natural and grammatically correct, give a clear topic sentence then add one concise supporting detail using linking words. Correct articles and phrasing (e.g., 'a bike', 'interested in bikes'). Avoid repeating the same idea; show one specific example to illustrate your knowledge.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I was always interested in them. For example, I used to read magazines about different bicycle models and watch videos about bike maintenance, so I learned a lot about gears and brakes.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence, then use linking words to organise your supporting details. Use correct expressions (e.g., 'young people' and 'older people' or 'the elderly'), and be more specific with examples (where and why they are popular). Keep it concise and avoid repeating 'like'.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country. For example, many young people prefer sporty road or mountain bikes for exercise and commuting, while older people often choose simple, classical models for casual riding around the neighborhood.

× No, I didn't have bike, but I like bikes and I am into bikes.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike, but I like bikes and I am into bikes.

The noun 'bike' is a singular countable noun and requires an article. Use the indefinite article 'a' before singular countable nouns when mentioning them generally. Suggestion: say 'a bike' or 'any bikes' depending on meaning.

× I have a lot of bike knowledge.

✓ I have a lot of bike knowledge. --> I have a lot of knowledge about bikes.

The phrase 'a lot of bike knowledge' uses 'bike' incorrectly as a modifier for 'knowledge'. 'Bike' should be plural or rephrased: 'knowledge about bikes' or 'a lot of bicycle knowledge'. Suggestion: use 'knowledge about bikes' or 'a lot of bicycle knowledge' for natural phrasing.

× I think in my country bikes are very popular among the youngsters and also among the old ages.

✓ I think in my country bikes are very popular among young people and also among older people.

The phrases 'the youngsters' and 'the old ages' are unnatural and incorrect. 'Youngsters' can be used but 'young people' is more natural; 'old ages' is incorrect — use 'older people' or 'the elderly'. Also 'among young people' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× The old age people like classical bikes and the youngsters like sports.

✓ Older people like classic bikes and young people prefer sports bikes.

'Old age people' is incorrect; use 'older people' or 'the elderly'. 'Classical' is incorrect when describing bike style; 'classic' is appropriate. 'The youngsters like sports' is incomplete — 'sports' should be 'sports bikes' or 'sport bikes' or 'young people prefer sports bikes'. Suggestion: use 'classic bikes' and 'sports bikes' or 'sport bikes' for clarity.